I hadn’t identified the grammatical errors – and neither had my editor. So a total rework is under way, and it’s already a cleaner, more concise and faster moving story.
Not all grammatical police have an understanding about what a good manuscript is these days. There are modern ways of writing and older styles. For three months I have analysed the critical evaluations, and asked the 90 percent who loved my book if they noticed the errors. Of course, they didn’t. They were too engrossed in the story to see the errors.
I engaged a writing coach, who has taught me such a lot. Enough to rework the chapters and speed up the story. Eliminating the main negative relating to the slowness of part one. Hence the rewrite.
I have a large number of original copies available for a cheap price if you would like a signed copy. If the series becomes a huge success, these original signed copies just may be valuable (I say with tongue in cheek.)
Book two of the series is delayed a little, but will be out in 2017. After Book One has been re published.
Check out the preview of chapter one , two and three on this website.